My attempt to be 'poetic':
Truth Hurts
Started with a hunch
Turned out to be true
I saw him there..denying the truth
The world suddenly became small
Things that he said
Things that he did
They were lies
If they were not lies
They deviated from the truth
I was a fool
To believe
I was a fool
To be told
differently
I had never seen someone so uncomfortable
When facing with the truth
Because I know
That truth hurts
Hours and hours I wept
Years and months were wasted
Believing
When you found out the truth
It cuts like a knife
No matter how hurt it was
Life has to go on.......
In time...these truths
Make you strong
9 comments:
I feel your pain my friend. This is pretty good, but I am no expert. All I know is that matters of the heart do bring out some of the best art in people. I am going through a situation where the other party refuses to speak and the silence is so deadly I brings out so many thoughts and emotions. This is not the place to discuss of this.
My friend, like I said before, I would love to get to know you a little more and I am always available for you. You have made me so happy when I am dealing with the reality of life and it's many quirks. Your words always put a smile on my face when I am lost. That is how you received your pro Flickr account my dear. Sorry I do not get over here more often, But my life has been really busy for a change. Talk at you soon, I hope.
be good
joe
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Thank you my friend
You have been great
I hear ya
We'll talk soon
That was quite 'poetic' but I think you are right about all these hardships and no matter how truth hurts, they make us strong
Hang in there funkee
I am sure you have what it takes to pull through
wow, nice poem
Dane: Min, can I ask you something?
Min: Sure
Dane: Why can't men be faithful?
Min: I don't know..
Dane: What if your husband cheats on you?
Min: Hmmm...I will be sad, but it's alright with me..because I know men do that...I just don't want to know about it.
Dane: It's alright with you????
Min: I am done worrying to be honest with you. A friend's heart just collapsed last week (literally), worrying about the cheating husband and 2 kids. Years of arguments...not being able to settle...so..if he cheats he cheats...not much I can do about it....
there are husbands who don't cheat. please, there are men who are madly in love with their wives, who are faithful and cherish the relationships they have. Who vow whole-heartedly till death do us part.
this is deep!
wow! azi! ini pasal si budak tu ke?
kak chik
quite a poetry here
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